Exploring the Effects of Individual Formative Feedback on the Writing of Descriptive Texts among PINJ Level 2 Students

ABSTRACT: This action research study aimed to explore the effects of formative feedback on the writing of descriptive texts in a 2nd level course of Programa de Inglés para Niños y Jóvenes students. Under little exposure to writing development activities and lacking feedback in the few ones, this st...

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Autores:
Osorio Taborda, Maria Isabel
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Trabajo de grado de pregrado
Fecha de publicación:
2024
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Universidad de Antioquia
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eng
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Feedback
Formative feedback
Students
Texts
Writting
Escritura
Estudiantes
Retroalimentación
Textos
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title Exploring the Effects of Individual Formative Feedback on the Writing of Descriptive Texts among PINJ Level 2 Students
spellingShingle Exploring the Effects of Individual Formative Feedback on the Writing of Descriptive Texts among PINJ Level 2 Students
Feedback
Formative feedback
Students
Texts
Writting
Escritura
Estudiantes
Retroalimentación
Textos
http://id.loc.gov/authorities/subjects/sh85047647
http://id.loc.gov/authorities/subjects/sh85129296
title_short Exploring the Effects of Individual Formative Feedback on the Writing of Descriptive Texts among PINJ Level 2 Students
title_full Exploring the Effects of Individual Formative Feedback on the Writing of Descriptive Texts among PINJ Level 2 Students
title_fullStr Exploring the Effects of Individual Formative Feedback on the Writing of Descriptive Texts among PINJ Level 2 Students
title_full_unstemmed Exploring the Effects of Individual Formative Feedback on the Writing of Descriptive Texts among PINJ Level 2 Students
title_sort Exploring the Effects of Individual Formative Feedback on the Writing of Descriptive Texts among PINJ Level 2 Students
dc.creator.fl_str_mv Osorio Taborda, Maria Isabel
dc.contributor.advisor.none.fl_str_mv Arias Patiño, Natalia
Londoño Arroyave, Cristian David
dc.contributor.author.none.fl_str_mv Osorio Taborda, Maria Isabel
dc.subject.proposal.spa.fl_str_mv Feedback
Formative feedback
Students
Texts
Writting
Escritura
Estudiantes
Retroalimentación
Textos
topic Feedback
Formative feedback
Students
Texts
Writting
Escritura
Estudiantes
Retroalimentación
Textos
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description ABSTRACT: This action research study aimed to explore the effects of formative feedback on the writing of descriptive texts in a 2nd level course of Programa de Inglés para Niños y Jóvenes students. Under little exposure to writing development activities and lacking feedback in the few ones, this study proposed a series of writing activities supported on individual formative feedback, with a specific focus on five students of variable needs and writing abilities. This study followed a qualitative research framework with instruments such as teacher journals, recordings, and students’ artifacts to collect data. This study combined an action research design with a Descriptive Case Study method. Data collected stemmed from one pre-test, one post-test, teacher journals, audiorecordings of feedback, and students’ written artifacts. Findings show positive effects of formative feedback on students’ writings. Students used FF to validate and confirm both content and language knowledge, before and while writing. FF led students to apply instant corrections from word and sentence levels toward text level. Eventually, FF fostered mistake realization among learners, thus growing their writing confidence, achieving desired writing accuracy, or exploring meaning-making. Indeed, FF gave students the opportunity to ponder their knowledge, lead their own process, recognize their abilities, and tackle their own weaknesses. It also gave them the possibility of confronting needs and using learnings in upcoming writing activities.
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spelling Arias Patiño, NataliaLondoño Arroyave, Cristian DavidOsorio Taborda, Maria Isabel2025-02-13T20:22:16Z2025-02-13T20:22:16Z2024https://hdl.handle.net/10495/44879ABSTRACT: This action research study aimed to explore the effects of formative feedback on the writing of descriptive texts in a 2nd level course of Programa de Inglés para Niños y Jóvenes students. Under little exposure to writing development activities and lacking feedback in the few ones, this study proposed a series of writing activities supported on individual formative feedback, with a specific focus on five students of variable needs and writing abilities. This study followed a qualitative research framework with instruments such as teacher journals, recordings, and students’ artifacts to collect data. This study combined an action research design with a Descriptive Case Study method. Data collected stemmed from one pre-test, one post-test, teacher journals, audiorecordings of feedback, and students’ written artifacts. Findings show positive effects of formative feedback on students’ writings. Students used FF to validate and confirm both content and language knowledge, before and while writing. FF led students to apply instant corrections from word and sentence levels toward text level. Eventually, FF fostered mistake realization among learners, thus growing their writing confidence, achieving desired writing accuracy, or exploring meaning-making. Indeed, FF gave students the opportunity to ponder their knowledge, lead their own process, recognize their abilities, and tackle their own weaknesses. It also gave them the possibility of confronting needs and using learnings in upcoming writing activities.RESUMEN: Este estudio de investigación-acción tuvo como objetivo explorar los efectos de la retroalimentación formativa en la escritura de textos descriptivos en un curso de 2º nivel de estudiantes de Programa de Inglés para Niños y Jóvenes. Con poca exposición a actividades de desarrollo de la escritura y baja retroalimentación en las pocas realizadas, este estudio propuso una serie de actividades de escritura apoyadas en la retroalimentación formativa individual, con un enfoque específico en cinco estudiantes con necesidades y habilidades de escritura variables. Este estudio sigue un marco de investigación cualitativa, y utilizó instrumentos como diarios de campo, grabaciones y artefactos de los estudiantes para recopilar datos. Este estudio combinó un diseño de investigación acción, con un método de estudio de caso descriptivo. Los resultados muestran los efectos positivos de la retroalimentación formativa en los escritos de los estudiantes. Los estudiantes utilizaron la retroalimentación formativa para validar y confirmar sus conocimientos lingüísticos y de contenidos, antes y durante la escritura. La RF llevó a los estudiantes a aplicar correcciones instantáneas desde el nivel de la palabra y la frase hasta el nivel del texto. Con el tiempo, la RF fomentó la comprensión de errores entre los estudiantes, aumentando así su confianza en la escritura, logrando la expresión gramatical deseada o explorando la creación de significados. Sin duda, la RF le dio a los alumnos la oportunidad de reflexionar sobre sus conocimientos, dirigir su propio proceso, reconocer sus capacidades y abordar sus propios puntos débiles. 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